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Poem in Response

After reading “Remember This…” by Carla Milho – a good friend and wonderful writer from Lisbon, Portugal – wherein she speaks to the strength of love, I was inspired to write this poem in response…

Until the End

The star I see
Within your eyes
Grows bright across the land

Straight from my heart
Through spoken word
I’m asking for your hand

Please take this ring
And put it on
Let’s walk together, now

From here to there
Until the end
In love, let’s make this vow

© 2022 Phil Perkins


PHOTO CREDIT: modified photo from unsplash.com.

Comments

16 responses to “Poem in Response”

  1. Inge David Avatar

    Ik heb ” Remember this” gelezen en ik moet eerlijk zeggen dat je een goed antwoord hebt gegeven. Zoals ze zegt” Liefde is een werkwoord” ….. Jammer om niet te kunnen inzien hoe schoon het leven kan zijn …
    Ik hou van je gedicht, de vriendschap en de liefde die je heeft aan iedereen.
    Beautifully done!!

    1. Phil Avatar

      Heel erg bedankt, mijn beste vriendin Inge ~ Ik waardeer je vriendelijke woorden en ik ben blij dat je mijn gedicht mooi vindt! Wishing for you a wonderful Wednesday! 🙏🏻😊

  2. Carolyn Kaiser Harmon Avatar

    Who wouldn’t say yes? WOW! ❤️

    1. Phil Avatar

      So kind you are, dear Carolyn ~ thank you! 🙂

  3. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Wow this is gorgeous Phil. I thought you were married! lol I can never read Carla as time to translate in mid reading seems to be a problem but love her! 💖💖🌻🙏

    1. Phil Avatar

      lol Thanks so much, my dear friend Cindy ~ I appreciate your kind words! Yes, Carla is precious. 🙏🏻😊

      1. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

        You’re so welcome. Happy day dear Phil! 💖🌻🙏

        1. Phil Avatar

          TY Cindy, you too. 🌻

  4. Kally Avatar

    Brilliant just brilliant!! 👏🏻

    1. Phil Avatar

      So kind of you to say, dear Kally ~ thank you! 🙏🏻😊

  5. LaDonna Remy Avatar

    Truly beautiful 💗

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you very much, dear LaDonna 🙏🏻😊

  6. Balle Avatar

    My dear friend, I did not know that you are such a wonderful writer 👏 The song in response is awesome, I really liked it 💖 But that’s the point, art and singing go together perfectly….

    1. Phil Avatar

      Thank you so much, my dear friend Balle. Yes, I think that the song goes well with the poem, and I’m glad you have enjoyed both. 🙏🏼😊

      1. Balle Avatar

        I confirm that 😊

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